This term we have been focsuing on persuasive writing. This is my first time doing it and I'm acutally proud of my work. Here is my persuasive writing that I worte and I hope you like it.
Why is basketball better than netball?
Have you heard about Steven Adams? He is a famous NBA basketball player from New Zealand. Steven Adams has 10,000 fans in America but if you was a netball player/star, you won't get so much fans.
That is why I think basketball is better than netball!
Why I think basketball is better than netball because over 29.04 million people go and watch the NBA team play but only 1.2 million go or watch the Silver Ferns netball team play. Basketball has more players than netball because boys and girls can play both sports but if a boy plays netball, they would feel really uncomfortable.
Basketball is a better sport because you can earn more money, the money you can earn for basketball is over $3.1 million but only netball gets about $30,000.
That's why you should pick basketball not netball!
Why I think basketball is better than netball because basketball has been alive for many of year but netball hasn't been here for that long. For basketball there is more longer games, you work more as a team, everyone has there own postion to play and you can be more agressive.
I hope you pick basketball because is is a better sports to play and you will have more fun!
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