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Wednesday, March 17, 2021

'Show don't tell" narrative openings- English

Today we are doing "show don’t tell” to write 3-5 effective narrative openings. I will be reflecting on 3 photos that I'm going to "show not tell you". This has to do what image has given, I hope you enjoy it. Here's what I wrote.


1.  As I was sitting down on the step while it was frosty, a man walked past me and gave me this side view look, that didn't suprise me.


 

2. Is anyone around me? I need to take this luscious meat home tonight for my kids.


  

3. It was just a common day for me as I felt the feeling of boredom once again.


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